My latest drawing It takes about 45 hours. I used 35x50cm paper , 2B , 3B , 4B , 6B and 8B. Normally It has a lot of tree but I changed background of car.
Wow! It's a very nice piece you have here. The composition seems a bit busy for me. The cobble stones are very darkly outlined and create patterns that distract my vision of the car. Also, the lines in the background of the windmill and fence are very crisp and clean. I would have blurred them so that the eye does not go back there and stay there. Again, i want my car to be the focus, not the background. The stance of the Impala is very nice. Your proportions are pretty close, and you did a great job on presenting the lines and character of the '66 Impala. You have a beautiful range of values here. The piece is overall a bit dark for my tastes, but a very nice range of values nonetheless. And you also have some very fine gradients in this. It's a very good piece of work.
First of all I thank you very much for your detailed comment I agree with your comment. I want to draw clear background , but sometimes car is not focused. I try to draw light or blurred background for my next drawings. Gradients and some distortions are because of photo shoot. I pay attention to your opinions thanks again I am open to constructive criticism like yours
The composition seems a bit busy for me. The cobble stones are very darkly outlined and create patterns that distract my vision of the car.
Also, the lines in the background of the windmill and fence are very crisp and clean. I would have blurred them so that the eye does not go back there and stay there.
Again, i want my car to be the focus, not the background.
The stance of the Impala is very nice.
Your proportions are pretty close, and you did a great job on presenting the lines and character of the '66 Impala.
You have a beautiful range of values here. The piece is overall a bit dark for my tastes, but a very nice range of values nonetheless.
And you also have some very fine gradients in this.
It's a very good piece of work.
I agree with your comment. I want to draw clear background , but sometimes car is not focused. I try to draw light or blurred background for my next drawings. Gradients and some distortions are because of photo shoot.
I pay attention to your opinions